The pitch: https://youtu.be/EMNcFx3jqMA
Reflection: I was grateful for the feedback I received given that this was my first ever pitch. I worked on adjusting the angle so I could be more direct with my audience and slowing down my words. I also feel like I added more emotion with this one because it’s a subject I’m actually passionate about and could really express my excitement with it. I think this is why I was also able to meet the time limit.
The adjustments you made to the camera angle/distance were effective in making the pitch look more natural. I like how your pitch was specific to the audience and informative. The information you provided in the pitch really showed that your business idea has been well thought out. I don't really have any advice to give, I think your elevator pitch was done really well as is.
ReplyDeleteI think you made great adjustments to your last elevator pitch and I also greatly appreciate the feedback that you gave me for mine! Your tone and delivery was more consistent and focused and your explanation of the business idea gave a clear vision of what you have been working on with this class. I am excited to see how your idea develops even more!
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